FREE WRITE(BASELINE)

One thing i adore is my family.When i have a problem they give me advice.Like one day when i was in 5 grade,a girl was eating and she through her garbish in the floor.Then the teacher came and saw the garbish infront of me.She told me to pic it up and i refuse to do it..
Then she took me to the office to call my mom.I told them it wasen't me, but they didn't belive me.My mom told me to say the truth and i did,but they though i was lieing.!8-( So they called the girl who was in 4 grade and who did it.You want to know what happend??

THE GIRL REFUSED TO SAY THE TRUTH!!My mom said every time said "Sometimes it's hard to say the truth,But is the best to do other than lieing","the truth takes you to a better consequenses and the lies takes you to bad consequenses."..From that time i learned to say the truth...!8-)

MAKING BREAD

It all started when my father Adalberto came and said he was going to teach us how to make bread.We were all ready to begin, but we needed materials.

First we gathered our materials,and suppies like sugar,flour,a little oil,colored sprinkles,brown sprinkles, and eggs.

Next we needed to mix the flour with the sugar,and oil.And the rest of the materials..

Eventually we put the flour with all the ingredients into the oven.we waited about one hour and a have.

Then in the middle of cooking.We put the colored sprinkles in the bread.Then we closed the oven and let it cook.

Lastly we took the bread out of the oven and took a pice to taste .It taste like the Mexican bread ,but a little different.But it did taste splendid.What i did to the bread afterwards gave some to my friends and family.They told me they did like it.I was happy my dad did the tasty bread ever!!!!!

child abuse

I want to inform parents about child abuse in my community.The purpose of my article is to give information to the parents about child abuse.In this article i am going to discuss child abuse ,how chld abuse affects kids , how the kids get abuse , how the kids body get affected.

Parents are worried and they hit there kids.Sometimes mom or dad have problems but they take it out by hitting kids or sometimes dads have problems with alcholism,that they start by hitting there kids.

The body can't resit the hurtting ,they bled faster.It leaves marks on their body.

The kids get on parents nerves.Sometimes kids get into trouble.Or maybe the kids don't respect their parents.

One of his/her bones are in terrible condition.Maybe the kids bodies get paralized, or maybe the heart can't resit more longer.

In conclusion , i have discussed child abuse, how child abuse affects kids, how the kids get abuse, how the kids bodies get affected.I want to inform the community about child abuse.I suggest people to donot get into troblue with things.In order to find out more information about

who am i ???

My personal attributes and personality


Hii my name is emma ,i am in 7 grade ,i have 13 years old. My personal attributes are,
i have black short hair.I have black eyes , and i have chuky arms.My personality is , people describe me as mediam.But most of the time agreeable.

My skills and talents

I am slendid at video games, also i am amazing cooker.I am exelent dancer.I
am very very inteligent student at ela.Another of my skills is i like to write.I am
professional at taking care of kids.

How can i use my skills & talents to contribute to my community?

I can help my community by cooking.Making food for people to taste new food
other contries.Another way i can contribute my talent is by making a contest of the bronx vs brainbrige....The conpetition could be about video games.Because i am amazing for that...And we could win..!

What can i improve about myself?And how ca i improve??

The things that i can improve are to be more talkitive,participate more in my clasess,
not get into trouble.I can improve being talkitive by talking more and talk with the teacher and to my friends.I can improve participating by rasing my hand when they tell me to answer some question.Or if i have a answer to say it because that could be the answer..I can improve not getting into trouble by inoring people that cuase trouble every time..

la llorona

Dear Llorona:

I read your story entitled"La Llorona".Your story was about that you killed babies,and your husband.Then you went to a soilder to say "where are my babies".I am writing this letter to you because i want to know why you killed your babies and your husband.And now you are a legen in mexico.That means body talks about you.Even me i am scared of you.
One day i was at my house with my sisters,cousing and brothers.We all saw through the window to see what's happening.What we saw it was scary.We saw a woman with a white robe crying "ahy mis hijos","donde estan mis hijos". She was crying , screming.My sisters got scared,so the woman was in the other building.My sisters , cousings went there.I was with my sisters, we saw a black spirit walking.We got out of there as fast as we could.
I belive in you,because i saw your spiri.Another thing i saw about you was yopur movie about you killing your son and your husban.This reminds me of when i when i went to a sleep over to my cousing house.When all(everyonee) was asleep.I hear voices crying i was hugging my mickey mouse.I was so scared i dind't wanted to go to the bathroom.
Some questions i have in my mind are why did you killed your babies?,why did you killed your husband?,if i was you i wouldn't kill my babies nither my husband.
In conclusion i am scared of you.My point is that i would protect my family and not killed them.Now you are a legen in mexico even in united sates.I enjoyed your story and your movie.

your fan,
Ema Trujillo.

evelyn cisneros: prima ballerina

Dear students:
i am writing this letter to you because ,i want you to know about a wonderful book i have read entitle "Evelyn cisnoros prima ballerina" there was a girl named Evelyn that was Mexican. she was teased.she became very shy and her mother suggested she take balle classes.Evelyn took it and she succeeded.
she soon knew every dance.Evelyn had achieved her dream of being a ballerina.she performed in concerts and became famous.
i recommend this story to every body in the world because if you can dream anything you can achieved anything like a dream in your life.i enjoyed reading this book because it is true all the information i mention happen to me too.!!!another reason i enjoy the book is because if you have a dream don't give up keep on until you had achived your dream.this story can inspire you to do not give up on any dream you have.the story can help you or can give an idea to you about not giving up.!!


SINCERE:
Ema trujillo.